How Spooky Do You Like It?
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I do villains well. At least I think so, since Candi and Jenn said they fell in love with the villains I wrote in my two single title manuscript. I am not sure that I intended for that to happen but I am a bit twisted sometimes. Those villains are suave and sophisticated and they have a dark side. And we are not talking about dark as in those tortured heroes I like so much. No this is horror dark!
I have a really hard time reading about psychopaths and serial killer, they terrify me. I had nightmares for weeks reading one of Dean Koontz novel and I had only skimmed it. I wish I could write those, but I can’t. My villains are more subtle, never completely plain evil. I like them to act horribly but also to have a longing that makes them almost human. Yet it would preferable not to cross their path, for they have no redemption.
In ANCIENT WHISPERS, my villain is a rogue sorcerer. He loved badly and possessively, traded his soul for power and is now “undead.” Which means that he possesses only faint senses. He likes excessive. He is attracted to extreme emotions such pain, lust and pure love, to women that are child-like, beautiful and vulnerable, to wild and powerful music. He had no taste but longs for the finer things in life. Yet, he can barely feel a hint of them.
I was curious to see how others wrote villains, so I turned to my writing partners and to some authors and ask for their opinions? Here is what they have to say:
“I like my antagonists served up non-homogeneous. Yes, keep the necessary cookie-cutter power, implacability, and conviction. But stir in at least one unique physical or psycho-sociopathic trait that brands them in the mind of the reader. Someone they’ll never forget. Then I like to flavor them with a dash of believable virtue, an endearing or sympathetic quality that pulls the reader in — if only for a moment — before we must destroy them in the most satisfying way. Have you ever met a memorable villain who wasn’t complex?” -Musetracker John Roundtree
“My villains are the scoundrels you love to hate. But I find it essential for the reader to be able to empathize with him/her as humans. They are driven by real feelings we all have such as jealousy, anguish, betrayal, and even love. These emotions can be a powerful force behind any number of actions, ruthless or consequential.” – Musetracker Jenn Bray Weber
“The best villains represent a hero or heroine’s greatest weakness. In Hunger what Holly fears most is that her new dark nature will claim her. She’s become a vampire, but she’s fighting the darkness. Dillon is her fear, her greatest weakness, personified. He *is* the burning hunger she fights, walking around with a rock star’s swagger and a cowboy’s drawl. He’s a deliciously perfect villain because he seductively represents the way evil is tempting Holly. (By the way, he seduced my editor right into wanting a sequel!)” – Barbara J. Hancock, author of Hunger from Samhain Publishing www.barbarajhancock.com
I believe a good villain is three dimensional. Everyone cares about something or someone – even those individuals we consider evil – and that aspect of the villain’s personality can make the character leap off the page. When an author allows the reader to see the villain’s humor, compassion, or tenderness to another, the villain is no longer just evil. Darth Vader, one of the greatest villains of our time, became much more complex when we learned he wasn’t “born evil” but had once contained the capacity to love.” — Dawn McCure, author of Asmodeus from Samhain Publishing www.dawnmcclure.com
And here is a great passage about a villain, from Terry Spear’s Heart of the Wolf, Publishers Weekly Best Books of the Year.
“Volan stood like a predator waiting for the right time to go after his prey. His ebony hair was bound tight, and his black eyes narrowed. As a wolf, he was heavyset, broad shouldered and thick necked, the leader by virtue of his sheer size, powerful jaws, and wicked killer canines. But now, he stood as a man, his thoughts darker than night, his face menacing as he considered her swimming naked in the lake.”
And here is what Terry says about villains:
“What makes a good villain? He MUST have a human side to him. Even if he’s evil to the core, to make him three-dimensional, he has to have some humanity. So in the quote I gave of the villain, Volan, the gray pack leader in Heart of the Wolf, he does truly love Bella, in a possessive, obsessive-compulsive, unhealthy sort of way. So give your villain flaws, but also give him a heart in some respect, even if it’s just that he donates toys to a children’s home at Christmastime.
” – Terry Spears, author of Heart of the Wolf and Destiny of the Wolf from Sourcebooks Publishing www.terryspear.com
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Cool post! I don’t really know. I’ve created antagonists whose weaknesses overshadow their strengths, but I don’t know that I’ve created a true villain who embodies evil qualities. Very chilling. I like Dean Koontz’s newer novels, but could NEVER read Stephen King. *shudder*
Great post! I had a ball creating the villain in my time travel romance, Erin’s Rebel. I made him have real problems that transformed him into a guy the heroine could have easily have been attracted to if he wasn’t so darn nasty. My other historical villain in my second book had a lot of past baggage as well. But they were both believable in the context of the time they lived in and could almost have gained sympathy with readers, but they were just so mean.
I do have a vampire who’s a villain in a newly contracted short story, but because it is a short, I didn’t flesh him out as much. He’s just plain evil.
Jessica,
Interesting. I actually wanted to ask you what villains are in inspie. I read some romantic comedies where the villain is the other woman or something like that. It’s interesting, a villain doesn’t always have to be your typical evil bad guy.
Susan, that is so interesting. I was wondering about short stories as well. Obviously the whole thing has to be pretty simple if there is not much length to work with.
How boring our stories would be if our protagonists didn’t have someone to fight! It’s one thing to fight a concept like evil or darkness, but when that concept is personified. Wow! Stories jump off the page into our hearts.
This is a fascinating subject to ponder, Marie-Claude.
Super post, and I voted, M-C!!
As to the inspie question, or even writing for short stories, we can have villains other than people! Think man against nature!
Like the Perfect Storm.
Even Man against the psychic stuff!! Ghosts, aliens, you name it.
Man against himself also. Sometimes a character is his own worst enemy.
Great post. As others have mentioned villains definitely need to be three dimensional. I think a villain works well if he has many of the same characteristics as the hero or heroine. The reader can see his good qualities and realizes he’s made different choices, taken a different path to end up where he is now.
It’s always interesting to think about the villains. I remind myself to look at their side of the story and how they view the events unfolding and that for them, our story’s hero/heroine are the “villains”.
Most of my villains tend to carry what should be their virtue to extremes–whether it be honor, loyalty, patriotism, love– and their goal becomes worth whatever horrific cost. Meanwhile, they have friends, jobs, everyday issues, they love family members.
My heroes in turn have found themselves walking the edge of the darkside by the cause of their own virtues and strengths, and sometimes stepping over.
Jamie – I like what you mentioned about the heroes in your book. And looking at your villain’s side of the story is a good idea.
Very true Barbara. I like these stories that have big themes, you know, saving the world and all that!
Very true Terry. I had forgotten about that. All in your class if I remember well LOL.
Thanks for your support BTW!
Shelley, I like what you say about the different path taken. It is certainly well illustrated with Darth Vader as Dawn mentionned.
Jamie and Dawn,
Very well said. To see the world through the villain’s eyes, yes the heroes would be the villains to them.
i like my villains with an edge and i like them to be attractive, but in complete contrast to the looks of the hero, if my hero is dark with dark hair and dark eyes my villain will be light hair with light eyes and opposite build. They have to have one redeeming quality even if its something like loving the heroine, but more as a point of possession he loves her which makes him human but hes controlling and evil which makes him the villain.
Hey MC!
Well, you already know about my bad guys. And I agree with all your other authors quotes. I also agree with Terry on the antagonist not always being a evil villain.
In one of my shorts, the antagonist is in fact my hero. And ultimately, his antagonistic side wins. No happy ending for my hero.
Great post!!!
Jenn!
Oh Jenn, I have to read that short! Next week LOL
That’s interesting Kayla, I really like the idea of making the villain totally different physically. That’s very cool!
I love it when there’s just a little something that attracts you to a villain – it must be that human side..
It pulls you in as a reader because you know you really shouldn’t…
Great post, everyone!
I like the villian to be tall, dark, handsome and deadly. But, even though he’s a psychopath, a thread of humanity keeps him a complex and unpredictable sort. In the end, I like him to discover why he can only find sex, but not love.
Penny and elove,
Interesting. Looks like most want our villain slightly attractive. Are we all attracted to the dark side?
I love it as spooky as you can make it. I like my villains spook-tastic and I even want my heroes to have an element of spooky. The difference between good and evil, however, is crystal clear and my heroes would never cross a line to make the reader or heroine question their honor, I just like my heroes a bit dark.
What I found interesting in my upcoming The Strangely Beautiful Tale of Miss Percy Parker is that my lackey, the henchman character, actually ends up being more evil and spooky than the ‘bad guy’ – and since none of them are exactly human, it takes on a whole new element of not knowing what you’re dealing with. I hadn’t exactly planned on that dynamic, but it’s really fun to work with so I’ve been rolling with it.
Great post Marie-Claude! Best of luck with American Title!!
Hey, M-C,
Great post! We can always depend on you to create the most imaginative three-dimensional villians.
Voted an am looking forward to the results of AT-V!!!!
XXOO
John
Hi Leanne, Thanks for dropping by
I am soooo looking forward to read your book. I love a good gothic but done a more modern way. Great take on the villain.
John,
My ideal reader!
Thanks for the compliment. As you know, I write for you
Thanks for your votes and support!
Hi M-C,
Although, I haven’t read the other villains, I can truly say that I shuddered internally every time Volan came around while reading Heart of the Wolf. He was terrifying! Yes, he may have loved the heroine in his sick, demented way, but that quality in no way made him human to me—sort of like the villain in Sleeping with the Enemy. Some humans are more monster than the beast within an animal. In Volan’s case, though, he was a monster, whether in human or wolf form. IMO, there were no redeeming qualities about him. Terry did a wonderful job in creating this reprehensible creature.
Julie
Great article,
Without a good villian, there is not good story. A villian has to be rounded and complex. Not everyone is all good or all evil and if you have certain aspects then that makes a great baddie.
You got me thinking about my villians,
Thanks for the article,
Cheers
Connie
Man against himself also. Sometimes a character is his own worst enemy.
Very true, Terry!