Contest Wisdom by Ann Marsh

by Marie-Claude Bourque 

WE HAVE A WINNER! BOONE BRUX CONGRATULATION!

I am thrilled to welcome Dorchester author Ann Marsh today. Since I’ve joined the Dorchester team, I keep meeting authors that have got their starts through a contest. Of course, there are all the American Title winners and finalists and the Shomi contest winner Gayle Ann Williams. And we do all cross our fingers here for Candi who is a finalist in the Dorchester Best-Celler contest.

Some authors actually were discovered by Dorchester through plain old RWA contests (which still elude me to this day), for example Angie Fox who will visit us in January and Ann Mash a debut author with paranormal romance THE HUNT who I just had the delight to meet.

I cannot wait to read about her happy ending story and learn about her wisdom on the contest route to publication.

AND PLEASE DON’T FORGET TO COMMENT FOR YOUR CHANCE TO WIN A COPY OF ANN MARSHS DEBUT PARANORMAL ROMANCE: THE HUNT

       I sold my first two books because of RWA chapter contests.  I’d just been laid off from a dream job at Pixar and was bawling my eyes out at home when I read about the San Francisco RWA’s Heart-to-Heart contest. All you had to do was send them twenty-five bucks and the first twenty pages. Easy-peasy. I could do that. Hell, I had half a manuscript under my bed, didn’t I? Just to improve my odds, however, I whipped off another entry in two days—since Pixar had graciously gifted me with all that extra time—and sent it in. Six months later, I won. With the last minute entry. And got a request for a full from Hilary Sares of Kensington.

            Surreal.

            Not supposed to happen.

            Therefore, I had NO clue what to do next.

            So I spent a desperate month writing the unwritten 70,000 words and then sent the manuscript off, fired up a little Excel macro to tell me how many days I’d been waiting to hear from Hilary Sares who was, of course, going to offer me a six-book contract and an advance large enough to live on in the Bay Area while I wrote all the rest of my NYT bestselling books. See? Easy-peasy. I could so do this.

            While I waited to hear back from Ms. Sares and the Excel macro reached double and then triple digits, I entered some more contests. Because, you know, the first one was such a fabulous investment of my dollars that I just had to do it again.

            And again.

            And again.

            The first rule of contests? Contests are addictive. Oh, and, if you’re very lucky and if your CPA agrees, you might be able to deduct the cost of your entry.

            I spent just over a year gleefully doing the contest circuit until Dorchester’s Editorial Director, Alicia Condon, judged THE HUNT (placing me second, I might add) and bought the book. Some writers focus on one manuscript, polish it up, and then enter it absolutely everywhere. Next year, those writers enter a different baby in the literary stakes, unless they’ve landed a contract and rendered themselves ineligible. The rest of us? We take the shotgun approach. We lob a manuscript at this contest and a manuscript at that one. I had four different manuscripts on the contest circuit that year and no—none of them were even remotely close to done when I started entering. Some made it to the finals. Some didn’t.

            In addition to the obvious plus of conning Dorchester into actually publishing my book, three reasons had me entering contests.

  1. Feedback. Although it turns out I was too scared most of the time to look at it. I just flipped through some contest results today and discovered that Susan Squires had read my entry. And commented on it. In longhand. Too bad I was too chicken to read the feedback because I’d got fixated on the scores. The numbers don’t really matter. The comments do. Susan Squires LIKED my entry—and she had a great many valuable suggestions… that I’m going to take. Two years later, I’m going to have to Google-stalk her and send her a thank you email.
  2. Validation. Writing is lonely. Hearing someone who is not blood-related to you say “I like the way you write” means something.  Ask any contest winner: there’s the contest high, the euphoria of the final. Writing means rejection and lots of them. I’ve heard other writers say it and I’ll say it, too: every rejection may be one step closer to the one “yes” you need to get your book in the bookstore… but all those “no, thank yous” still hurt. Contest finals let you know you’re doing something right. That you just might be getting closer.
  3. The golden ticket. A contest final is like finding Willy Wonka’s ultimate Golden Ticket. You get to skip the slush pile. Go straight to the top of the editor’s TBR pile (OK, not really… but at least you’re not on the bottom of the pile). The day I wrote “Requested Materials” on the front of the box I was sending off to Kensington is indelibly stamped in my memory. Those letters looked like a 9.0 magnitude earthquake had just struck California. I made the kids kiss the box for good luck as well and sent the slightly sticky box on its way. Dorchester took submissions electronically, but I had the thrill of knowing I was at the top of the inbox.
  4. A thick skin. I didn’t know I was learning this from contests, but I was. So not only does it count—but this was the most important lesson of all. Take what you hear about your work with a grain of salt and look for advice you can apply… and grow a very, very thick skin. Learning to accept criticism—if not graciously, then quietly and not in a blogosphere-wide rant—was the most important thing contests gave me. Not the golden ticket pass to the editor’s desk or the really lovely framed certificate or even the slightly glazed look in my CPA’s eyes as I dumped all my receipts into his lap and demanded a tax write-off. What I learned was that some readers loved my stories—and some of them didn’t. Ouch.  It turned out to be good practice for my first set of revisions from my editor. And even better practice for my first set of reviews.

My very first contest entry ever? The one that won straight out of the gate and garnered a full? It also placed in the very bottom 50% of the Central Florida Romance Writers’ 2008 Touch of Magic Contest. Two judges loved it. The third deemed it outright unpublishable and said so. Quite frankly. My scores were 98, 96—and a 47. Welcome to contests. As one judge noted in her comments: “I loved the story. Some people won’t. It’s a matter of taste.” She was right. It is. I’ve read published books that have absolutely scaled the NYT Bestseller list—and loathed them. Just not to my taste. Contests are the same way and you need to grow that tough skin. Oh, and I sold that book. Not to Hilary Sares, but to Alicia Condon at Dorchester. And I sold it because I took the advice I got from the contest judge who hated the book so much she had to give it a 47 to make her point—and from Ms. Sares—and I rewrote that book until it was darker, sexier and sharper. BOND WITH ME comes out in September 2010 from Dorchester Publishing and I really need to go send that judge a thank you note.

Dr. Seuss has a fabulous set of lines in OH, THE PLACES YOU’LL GO!.  “Wherever you go,” he exclaims, “you will top all the rest. Except when you don’t. Because, sometimes, you won’t. I’m sorry to say so but, sadly, it’s true that Bang-ups and Hang-ups can happen to you”  For better or worse, he’s right. Contests involve a great deal of lucky—being lucky enough to draw a judge who likes what you write, for example. But, even if you’re staring at a 47 inked on top of your beloved manuscript and wondering how the heck that happened, there are still benefits you can take away. You’ve got the feedback. Plus, you simply can’t win if you don’t put yourself out there—so award yourself full points for courage. And, perhaps most importantly, you’ve still got a chance to network. Write thank you notes, to both your contest coordinator and to your judges. And remember… that the next contest will have a new set of judges. THE HUNT may have placed second in the 2008 Orange Rose—but that was only after it placed 17th out of 27 entries in the 2008 Spring into Romance contest and ignominiously failed to final.

As Dr. Seuss insists, “when things start to happen, don’t worry. Don’t stew. Just go right along. You’ll start happening too.” Dive in. Give contests a shot. Because, honestly, who knows what might be in it for you?

What an inspiring story Ann and great advice. I wish I had known all that when I started to do contest. Thank you so much for visiting and sharing with us.

Don’t forget to comment for your chance to win and you can get your own copy of THE HUNT by visiting Ann’s website or directly through Amazon.

26 Responses to Contest Wisdom by Ann Marsh

  1. Daria Drake says:

    I’ve had very similar experiences, and yes, once you get over the despair that someone hated your entry so much that they gave it a 47, you do learn something valuable… maybe something about your writing, or maybe who your target audience is not. :)

    The first year that I discovered contests, I entered the same manuscript in six. And while I got a wildly-divergent set of responses, there was one comment that ALL TWELVE JUDGES made–that my setting needed work. I spent the next year taking worldbuilding classes and focusing on bringing my setting alive, and the next year entered the new version again. Happy ending: the new version consistently got great remarks in the setting department.

    You just can’t beat contests for finding out where your weak spots are, and what you need to focus on improving.

    –Daria Drake (www.dariadrake.com)

  2. Rebecca says:

    Thanks so much for this post! As a fellow contest entrant, I could identify with this (although not yet the full story). What a great boost as I finish editing my entry for the Golden Heart. :-)

    Peace,
    Rebecca

  3. Lovely post, Anne, and I agree completely. I got my first sale through a contest, too…as well as feedback, validation, and a thicker skin, through that and many other contests – and yep, there were the same discrepancies in scores. I still remember the one where my high score was 100 and my low 46! Just a matter of taste…

    Re feedback, often I found the judges who gave me the middling scores were the most useful, because their comments showed me how I might improve my story to appeal to a wider audience.

    Susan Squires is great. You can contact her through her website – I did!

    Loved The Hunt!! and I’m looking forward to Bond With Me.

  4. Anne Marsh says:

    Dorchester is particularly fabulous about taking on new authors and seems to do a great deal on the contest circuit. There’s Next Best Celler (go, Candi!) and American Title and then they are always judging for the RWA chapter contests. I believe Leah H. said they had twelve new debut authors for 2009 alone… so, Rebecca, if you’re interested in RWA chapter contests, I’d strongly encourage you to look at ones where the finalists are judged by Dorchester editors (not to slight any of the other editors judging– kudos to them– but Dorchester seems to have a particularly strong track record of finding, signing and developing new author voices).

  5. Jessica says:

    Thank you for sharing this! The first contest I entered I finaled in (no sale though) so I know what you mean about the addiction. LOL I kept entering more but never finaled in another and for now I’ve taken a contest hiatus. You made some excellent points up there! Congrats on your sales. :-) I almost want to start entering them again…

  6. Hi Daria,
    I hear you. I once got a 40% on Whispers. I joke with Candi, John and Jenn that I beat them with the lowest score. I think my record has not been beaten yet. LOL

  7. Rebecca,
    Good luck with the Golden Heart! You are very brave. I never tried it. I was too scared!

  8. Hi Barbara,
    Thanks for stopping by! I didn’t know you sold through a contest as well.
    I would have put your name down :)
    folks… Barbara is with Dorchester as well. One of those 9 debut Dorchester authors this year.

    I like some contests that have published juges. I participated in the Emerald City two years ago and got superb feedback for Whispers. Then this year I judged. Only published and GH finalists as judges.
    So I think it helps.

  9. oops 12 debut in 2009, AnnI should have read that better. LOL
    I believe Barbara and Gayle and I are in 2010.

  10. Anne Marsh says:

    Sometimes, a low score means you need to revisit the craft basics. And, on the other hand, sometimes it means you have a very, very strong voice (which publishers love). Of course, determining which bucket your score falls into is a matter of personal choice ;)

    Once I consumed an entire consolatory bag of chips, it was useful for me to see what the 47-er disliked so much about my MSS. She had some valid points and then some of it was clearly a matter of not-my-cup-of-tea. I do think we need to start the Contest Diva’s equivalent of Worst Score Ever. A little laughter never hurts, plus the first time I scored so low (particularly after winning previously and of course believing every word of praise my judges had penned), I thought there was something really wrong with ME personally. I was still working on that thick skin part.

  11. Hi Jessica,
    Congrats on your final :)
    Contests are great and sometimes, like me and Whispers, it works best to send your work straight to editors.
    Trying both is probably a best bet!

  12. Boone Brux says:

    This is such a timely blog for me as I have been considering just how many contests do I want to enter. I had such great comments on my last contest even though I didn’t final. I wish all judges did such a fabulous job of giving a contestant feedback. It is so helpful. And you’re right, they are addictive. Thanks for a great blog. It helped me put things in perspective.

    Boone Brux

  13. Anne Marsh says:

    And I do think that having pubbed judges can help. I’ve met some wonderful unpubbed judges, but some of them don’t always see the forest for the trees (I should duck and cover here). They get so caught up on “the rules” and what a perfect contest entry should look like that they don’t think about what a marketable/sell-able book would look like. THE HUNT was in no way ready to print when Dorchester bought it– but they worked with me to make it as good as it could be and I’m proud of it. I would not, however, be surprised to find out that there were easily a dozen other entries in that contest that had the mechanics down better than I did…

    There really needs to be a category for “Does it have that spark?” or points for charisma or something. There are technical aspects such as POV switching that can be fixed. Having an idea that captures readers… not so much. I’d like to see contests reward that more.

  14. Ann,
    You make a good point about the strong voice.
    When I entered Whispers in RWA contests I got 40s and 100s.
    It was very confusing. I got called melodramatic and also lyrical.
    I don’t write in a traditional romance novel style and that maybe hard to please all judges.
    But then Leah liked it. I suspect she was willing to ignore the slow beginning (she cut about 40 pages of my first 3 chapters) because of some stuff she likes later.

    I did have some published authors who mentionned the strong voice possibility and I stuck with my style instead of watering it down to please everyone.

    Now with an editor, it is nice to see what I am good at (love scene and guy banter) and what suck at (humor… really bad at that, must not try humor LOL)

  15. Anne Marsh says:

    Donna Caubarreaux has a fabulous page listing upcoming contests and supportive Yahoo loops: http://contestdivas.blogspot.com/

  16. Another exciting blog! Musetracks is made of win.

    I think I’ve caught the contest bug. It’s such a rush. Not to mention I learned so much in these last few months.

    Thanks so much for sharing your experience, Anne. And congrats on your sales. :)

  17. What a great post! I just sent off two of my stories to a couple of contests, including the Golden Heart, and am now getting that antsy feeling even though the deadlines haven’t even hit. :-) I also had the experience of a near perfect score and a 40 something score. That was interesting. I remember being really irritated because if the low scoring judge had scored me two more points down I would have had a third judge brought in because of the huge difference in scores. Ah, the joys of contests.

  18. Anne Marsh says:

    Congrats, Angelia (and Rebecca, too!)… entering is a great step! I had one chance to do the Golden Heart before I sold. It’s not a feedback contest, but the potential upside is so huge! Unless they’ve changed the format, they do send you back your score and a matrix that lets you know which quartile you placed in. If you’ve really got the contest bug, there’s an RWA chapter contest “Finally a Bride” which is ONLY for manuscripts that finalled but did not win other contests– and they’ve allowed GH entries that placed in the top 50% but did not win. My personal take is that if you don’t put your book out there, you won’t get that sale–so you have to just keep making opportunities for yourself, whether it’s in a contest, an editor pitch, or the slush pile (and I did get three full requests from the slush pile… so it can be done… although now that I think about.. I think I set a new record for Harlequin rejections– it took four days, including a Sunday, from when I mailed the full from California to have it back on my front porch with a “No, thank you!”).

  19. D'Ann says:

    Hi, Ann.
    I’ve been entering contests this year, with the hope that an ed would notice me, but no luck so far. Some finals, and 1 win, but no request.

  20. Ann, what a great story! I’ve entered contests whenever I’ve found one that had a final round judge I couldn’t resist. I finaled in some, didn’t final in others….placed first in one. But I’ve yet to hook an editor into asking for more pages. Yet. I know one of these days I’ll write that book editors just can’t resist! :)

    Either way, contests ARE a good experience and help you prepare for those rejections. Plus, I like that you can get a completely “blind” read and find out how your book is hitting those readers.

  21. Anne Marsh says:

    D’Ann: I’ve heard that the market is very, very (very) slow right now. When I’ve been looking at the contest result announcements (yay Donna Caubarreaux! You do an awesome job!), I’ve been seeing way fewer requests than in 2008. My guess– and it’s a guess, so take it for what it’s worth– is that the publishing houses need a surer thing in a tighter market, so they’re not going as aggressively after new writers who basically have no loyal following to rush out and auto-buy their books. Plus, it’s always going to be cheaper upfront to do a reprint/reissue as you don’t have to spend as much (any?) time editing, there’s no author advance, and maybe you can reuse the cover art. Dorchester’s 2009-2010 list, for example, seems to have quite a few reissues.

    Your name is super familiar to me so… I’m guessing… you write paranormal? At least the paranormal market is fairly strong. Having just flipped through the latest issue of RT, I’m kind of glad I’m not trying to pitch a medieval historical.

    Hi, Cynthia! Didn’t you (cough) final/win in the Golden Heart? Or am I misremembering? I’ve found it fascinating to follow the GH blogs (and you guys are so fabulous for doing that!). Somehow, when I first started writing seriously (aka “Must. Sell. Book. For. Money.”), I was under the impression that the GH was like getting the ring on the merry-go-round and all doors would open and confetti would fly from the ceiling. Sigh. Reality checks are never fun. You’ve got good books though… the two of you wouldn’t be finaling if you didn’t, so it’s really a matter of time and the market aligning itself just right.

  22. Hi Ann,

    I agree with everything you said. I find contests helpful in so many ways. Actually, you can see how much I agree with you in the December issue of RWR :-) I think contests have a very specfic place in the growth of an author. I’m so glad to hear that you can get published through those contests. I’m still waiting, but your story has inspired me to keep plugging away! Thank you.

  23. John Roundtree says:

    Loved the story, Ann! You’re an inspiration!

  24. LOL. Yeah, I did final in the GH (didn’t win though!). And it did open some doors for me…I made some strides towards getting an agent and now have some good contacts for the next book because I now know which agents my writing is resonating with. So, it was all good and totally worth it.

    I think you’re right about the tighter market. It seems like authors have to write something very new and different to get the publishing world to sit up and take notice and give you a chance. I think I’m finally stepping out of the box with this current book I’m writing. We’ll see what happens!

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  26. wanda flanagan says:

    Great post I realy enjoyed it .

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